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Nick Winney's avatar

the use of Elders and burning did, strangely, make me assume christians of sorts...weirdly...

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it just came up on the feed here. thought you might have seen it too. i probably need to do more muting and blocking... have a peaceful sunday... im making birthday cakes again. my wife looked at it and said...is it a lasagna? 😑

Nick Winney's avatar

did you not see the video from the american churvh where they stage played the exevution of the immigrant and had all the kids chanting take him out n blow him up ?

A.P. Murphy's avatar

No mate I don’t watch American trash like that, my life is very busy indeed and I haven’t got time for shit of that nature. I’m not being snotty or snooty, it’s just that I don’t have a lot of time left and when I’m not learning something or working on something I prefer to relax with films, books, and music with a bit of value to them.

What would I learn if I watched a video of American christofascists being beastly? I mean, really, what would I discover?

Nick Winney's avatar

our conversation about M.A.D. yesterday inspired me to actually read some proper papers about war games and european preparedness vis nato vs russia, china and USA . so, thank you for the inspiration to improve my knowledge over “feelings and bekiefs”. Again.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

But incidentally referring to this story I deliberately didn't make them Christians because again I'm trying to avoid blaming this that or the other group. The tale is set in the Kollapse world of post-apocalyptic misery and really is about using the suffering of others as a way of solving one's own problems - scapegoating, you might say.

Nick Winney's avatar

beautifully bleak sir. and righteous. did that church machine gunning play in front of the kids - "take him out and blow him up" - and the horrible fires in spain perhaps whisper in your ear when you wrote this?

A.P. Murphy's avatar

I don't know what the first thing you mention refers to, but the wildfires are definitely a factor in this. You can't see columns of smoke and smell the burning in the air for days and days and not be affected somehow.

But it's also judgement - we are so happy to pass judgement and condemn, it seems sometimes that's ALL we ever do, search for the blameworthy, the one to single out and punish.

Yet how will we be judged, collectively? As the wise and humane generation, the prudent and foresightful ones? Karma is a bitch.

However it may be, this one came out quick and spontaneous, an hour from concept to finish, no revisions one draft only.

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Thank you for that acceptable ending. It would otherwise have been intolerable.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Incidentally the sins of the fathers are now to be visited on the children.

Just? In an Old Testament sense maybe.

A lot of Book of Job and the like gets distilled into this one.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

A post-apocalyptic tale in the Kollapse world though I took out overt references to that

Just saw a mail from that got trapped in spam folder BTW - check for reply!

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I got your reply btw!

I’m liking your approach to the Kollapse world - fragments here and there I mean. If you were to publish it as a collection you wouldn’t need to re-add the overt references, because inclusion in the collection would be enough. I like that idea - makes it more ambiguous and means the reader has to do some work, which is fun.