Thank you so much Caro, it was built on a great understanding between us of the kind of thing we wanted to do. The details of the story were completely improvised though, so it was exciting to see what would come back and where we were going next.
I imagine this is the spirit of the original "exquisite corpses" Dadaist writing game.
I just spent 15 minutes singing karaoke. It's a good tune!
A read, a laugh, a tear, a song or two... what more could you wish for? Thanks Shony!
this is so tactile and sensory. I love all the descriptions of sound and color.
This was evocative and beautifully built.
Thank you so much Caro, it was built on a great understanding between us of the kind of thing we wanted to do. The details of the story were completely improvised though, so it was exciting to see what would come back and where we were going next.
I imagine this is the spirit of the original "exquisite corpses" Dadaist writing game.
great stuff guys --mwah
Thanks a lot Jon, so pleased you like it man!
original freshness - as usual
A lullaby in itself.
Incantatory as it thins and thickens towards the end, trickling into a dreamlike harmonious rhythmic haze.
I have my thoughts, but will have to wait until the end to see if my hunch matches.
Thanks so much for that comment, Pablo, much appreciated. We hope to surprise the reader, which means surprising ourselves first!
Beautiful and a little tragic.
Thanks so much for that comment, hope you like the continuation!
*Domestic surreality meets cultish horror meets emotional estrangement wrapped in literary kitsch. ❤️ Stepford wives v. Don't worry darling.
Thanks so much Nico, stay tuned for the conclusion on Thursday.
Thanks so much Andrew, we're very happy you enjoy it so far!