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Man, this is fantastic. The idea of seeing the black sun inside the sun - so good. Love the sci-fi Halloween take. Congrats on placing

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Thanks very much Keith, I'm sure your own piece is going to be great.

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Oct 28Liked by A.P. Murphy

We should all start pompousing like Murph. Keep em guessing.

Great post dude. Great story.

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Thanks so much Jon. I couldn't stop pompousing even if I tried at this late stage, has to be said.

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Congratulations! A wonderful offering.

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Thanks so much Nadia, I'm so happy you liked it.

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I recognized your style immediately. Great story!

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Thanks WP3, your appreciation is really gratifying for me!

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this is stupendously good. i cant really begin to express all the notes you hit with this. and the pixies at the end? stop it. you're not playing fair.

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Thanks so much Nick, I'm so happy you like the Pixies video. I put intuition into the stories, so they're done quick, and painstaking finicky work into the videos so they end up being more work.

I'll be getting to your own contribution soon enough but I'm going by alphabetical order and you're so damned last-part-of-the-sequence. Thought of changing your name to Awhinney?

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"Spell my name with an S" the asimov classic...

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This one blew my mind. I thought it might be a Murph original, and I'm happy to see I was correct. 👁️

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As I was saying to EJ, the pompous citation from classic authors always a dead giveaway.

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🤣

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