Let me know how you get on with the book - as you remember I suggested it as a corrective for a dispassionate voice, a model to follow to inject some emotion in things. That's precisely how I was using it here
i was thinking it sounded like dark slices of that taut fraught love story from that very book which i am (at your suggestion) currently swirling slowly through ... and lo and behold it was!
If that's a cutup mishmash then you did a fantastic job. I thought it was great as it was. Very powerful, and brings out that messiness and ecstatic wild desperation of sex (well, some types of sec, anyhow).
Thanks, it’s more correct to say that a cut-up of Elizabeth served as the basis of it, there was quite a bit of editing, pushing pieces here and there and making up new bits.
This was a joy to read. Too many good lines to hold onto, great cut up AP. Inspiring
Thank you so much EMR! Very happy you enjoyed it!
Let me know how you get on with the book - as you remember I suggested it as a corrective for a dispassionate voice, a model to follow to inject some emotion in things. That's precisely how I was using it here
i was thinking it sounded like dark slices of that taut fraught love story from that very book which i am (at your suggestion) currently swirling slowly through ... and lo and behold it was!
it is chewy...you just cant read it quickly.
Nice work Mr Murphy.😎
Research into this flesh, why don’t you
I've been meaning to read that book for ages.
If that's a cutup mishmash then you did a fantastic job. I thought it was great as it was. Very powerful, and brings out that messiness and ecstatic wild desperation of sex (well, some types of sec, anyhow).
Went perfectly with that painting too.
Thanks, it’s more correct to say that a cut-up of Elizabeth served as the basis of it, there was quite a bit of editing, pushing pieces here and there and making up new bits.