Just as a fun side game, see if you can spot the FOUR deliberate 'mistakes' that I inserted into the text, four pieces of factual info that are just plain wrong.
Thanks so much, I'm really pleased that you liked it Bradley.
It's funny, I took the Suzy Creamcheese from a super-obscure 60s garage band called Daddy and His Patches. Never even knew about Frank Zappa using that name.
It might be a fun game to play to tag all the many film and pop-rock references I stashed in the story as easter eggs.
Dear Readers, Hope you enjoyed this piece.
Just as a fun side game, see if you can spot the FOUR deliberate 'mistakes' that I inserted into the text, four pieces of factual info that are just plain wrong.
I may not know enough about facts to find mistakes but i’ll try. Thank you for diversion!
Layers!
Oh baby, you want layers? We got layers: thick ones, flimsy ones, completely threadbare ones...
Um. That was perfect.
Thanks so much Sean, coming from you that is high praise indeed. I'm so happy my pieces are resonating with writers whose work I really admire.
Well, count me a fan. Excited to read more of your work. ❤️
"Of course she should have known - we did, didn't we?" 🤣
And the Palme d'Or goes to...[drum roll] Murph!
That was a fantastic story, man. With references from B.B. to Frank Zappa, what's not to love? Oh, and the ending. Bruh.
Thanks so much, I'm really pleased that you liked it Bradley.
It's funny, I took the Suzy Creamcheese from a super-obscure 60s garage band called Daddy and His Patches. Never even knew about Frank Zappa using that name.
It might be a fun game to play to tag all the many film and pop-rock references I stashed in the story as easter eggs.
Because of the Bardot, I want to listen to Serge Gainsbourg.
This is what you want
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h0xUjsxwrkE
Me likee! "Ca pourra changer" is a banger too.
Damn. That was amazing.
Thanks a lot Jon. It's very encouraging that you dig it.
ok I loved this
Thanks EJ. Glad it worked for you.