I like all the beaty beats and clickety click in this prose. Also that name, Supratika, makes me twitch in a pleasing way. Really enjoyed this chunk of ideas.
First, I love this kid, and I love the free form prose and the rhythm. The imagrey is amazing, especially at the end, when Malik gets stomped. This is so dark and funny. My favorite kind of fiction. I loved it.
Thank you so much for that Tabitha, and I hope you enjoy the continuation story from this week when Malik actually (belatedly) gets stompso for realsies.
Yeah, that sorta thing, pity these supernatural familiars and servants with awesome powers are used for stomping on people's bullies and other localized ills. Think what a rocketpowered double war elephant might do in realigning social issues...
Still going to have to stomp some bullies first in my neck of the woods…. I wonder if one war elephant would be enough for the heavily armed populace here.
I like all the beaty beats and clickety click in this prose. Also that name, Supratika, makes me twitch in a pleasing way. Really enjoyed this chunk of ideas.
Yaaar Supratika is a right nice name, clicked on that right away. Cheers matey, ¡gracias y hasta la vista!
First, I love this kid, and I love the free form prose and the rhythm. The imagrey is amazing, especially at the end, when Malik gets stomped. This is so dark and funny. My favorite kind of fiction. I loved it.
Thank you so much for that Tabitha, and I hope you enjoy the continuation story from this week when Malik actually (belatedly) gets stompso for realsies.
That link again
https://thestrangenesskit.substack.com/p/the-low-hanging-fruits-of-the-liberty
I just restacked it!
This was awesome… also, just gonna drop this ancient tandem psychic war elephant here…
https://youtube.com/shorts/ZT3BtLsNEik?si=6cdXoNZ_KNjKxCNv
Yeah, that sorta thing, pity these supernatural familiars and servants with awesome powers are used for stomping on people's bullies and other localized ills. Think what a rocketpowered double war elephant might do in realigning social issues...
Still going to have to stomp some bullies first in my neck of the woods…. I wonder if one war elephant would be enough for the heavily armed populace here.
This was so fun! Just rolled through the emotions like he rolled through the thoughts!
Thanks so much NJ, this one I made a very spontaneous flow of consciousness, a big block or rush of fantasy. Your appreciation much appreciated.
Loved this piece. Hated Malik!
Punk-ass Malik got pachydermed up! Nice stuff, Murph.
malik had it coming
Hell yeah, fantastic stuff
Thanks Will
Really enjoyed this, Murph!
Thanks a lot Seany, I appreciate the comment my friend
I’m not one for prompts but this is good
Thanks a lot, CC, appreciate that